tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post112896493014650314..comments2024-02-09T05:30:07.127-05:00Comments on Blogpourri: The Alibi - Part V (Final)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1130480084301407252005-10-28T02:14:00.000-04:002005-10-28T02:14:00.000-04:00Thanks Minal. I do understand your comment about t...Thanks Minal. I do understand your comment about the ending, but I guess I wanted to present all the realities (at least in the eyes of each of the three people) and have the reader make up their mind about what Suman and Ravi would do next. Would they tell each other? Would they tell the father and ease his conscience? Also, was it fate that Suman and Ravi got married to each other? How much do Sujatha Bagalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02140274113596874518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1130407775289560282005-10-27T06:09:00.000-04:002005-10-27T06:09:00.000-04:00Sujatha:Owing to some hectic routines I finally re...Sujatha:<BR/><BR/>Owing to some hectic routines I finally read through the entrei story. I did not want to read it in parts as I knew I could lose the link considering my schedules and I hate it when I'm left strandled in the middle of a story as good at this.<BR/><BR/>Really loved the way you have written it, but I would have liked a different ending. It kind of was an anti-climax for me when Minalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556930930046840091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129779593813388282005-10-19T23:39:00.000-04:002005-10-19T23:39:00.000-04:00Thanks Aditya! I am delighted with the response!Thanks Aditya! I am delighted with the response!Sujatha Bagalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02140274113596874518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129745447743686412005-10-19T14:10:00.000-04:002005-10-19T14:10:00.000-04:00Sujatha :) this was brilliant. After I read the fi...Sujatha :) this was brilliant. After I read the first part, I waited for the last 4 parts to be posted so that I could read it in one go. <BR/><BR/>To put it mildly, your story telling is very nice. Keep writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129717518927422822005-10-19T06:25:00.000-04:002005-10-19T06:25:00.000-04:00Nandya, thanks and I definitely will.Ravi, Zambezi...Nandya, thanks and I definitely will.<BR/><BR/>Ravi, Zambezi, Sunil, Emma and Ambar, thank you for reading!Sujatha Bagalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02140274113596874518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129717244908451332005-10-19T06:20:00.000-04:002005-10-19T06:20:00.000-04:00Very very nice!Very very nice!Ambarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00959181158032836709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129684533284905872005-10-18T21:15:00.000-04:002005-10-18T21:15:00.000-04:00Very nice... And thoroughly enjoyable reading.Very nice... And thoroughly enjoyable reading.Emmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16996612252178277988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129681744898983722005-10-18T20:29:00.000-04:002005-10-18T20:29:00.000-04:00very nice! Good stuff...very nice! Good stuff...Sunilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07776658071546232685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129669886250777122005-10-18T17:11:00.000-04:002005-10-18T17:11:00.000-04:00Nice very nice.Nice very nice.zambezihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05969250474029757069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129655960237703832005-10-18T13:19:00.000-04:002005-10-18T13:19:00.000-04:00Simply terrific, Sujatha! Keep 'em coming...Simply terrific, Sujatha! Keep 'em coming...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129650614786587862005-10-18T11:50:00.000-04:002005-10-18T11:50:00.000-04:00hmmm...ok..gotchya....nevertheless brilliant stuff...hmmm...ok..gotchya....nevertheless brilliant stuff..<BR/><BR/>wud luv ur critique of stuff that i am trying to write...Nandyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06691894837326045249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129649338156608332005-10-18T11:28:00.000-04:002005-10-18T11:28:00.000-04:00Nandya, Shruthi and SF, thanks for reading the sto...Nandya, Shruthi and SF, thanks for reading the story and for your lovely comments. <BR/><BR/>Nandya, as for the last part, I don't think it was an attempt at either humor or irony. I was trying to present three different realities any one of which might have brought the three people to their present predicament...Sujatha Bagalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02140274113596874518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129647698603220662005-10-18T11:01:00.000-04:002005-10-18T11:01:00.000-04:00Very well written... enjoyed reading every bit of ...Very well written... enjoyed reading every bit of it!The ramblings of a shoe fiendhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02193183543700543479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129618246873210872005-10-18T02:50:00.000-04:002005-10-18T02:50:00.000-04:00Beautifully narrated, Sujatha... the suspense was ...Beautifully narrated, Sujatha... the suspense was just right. <BR/><BR/>I guess you were inspired by the story of the Wodeyar Family of Mysore, right? ;)<BR/><BR/>Keep writing, you are good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13834351.post-1129594227354450802005-10-17T20:10:00.000-04:002005-10-17T20:10:00.000-04:00u re quite a brilliant story teller....ur descript...u re quite a brilliant story teller....<BR/><BR/>ur description of the dinner table..superb..<BR/><BR/>te first four parts...brought me to the edge of my seat and the fourth part literally shook me up....but alas...i feel u did the story a whole lot of injustice by ur ending...if it was an attempt at humour or irony at the end...seriously...doesnt gel with the rest of the parts...Nandyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06691894837326045249noreply@blogger.com